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Shivers

April 1, 2009

The clock counts off seconds

like a heater straining

to stop mother nature,

to fend off an entire valley

of cold air. One more attempt

to control a world disinterested

in our comfort.

NaPoWriMo #1

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10 comments

  1. Awesome write.


  2. I really like the contrast of the ticking clock and the image of straining. They are very nice juxtaposed.


  3. So true. Excellent write.


  4. Great juxtaposition!

    THE JESTER RULES


  5. a world disinterested/in our comfort.

    This invites greater exploration.

    Thanks for the read.


  6. I can certainly relate to and appreciate the message and the succinct way its written.

    Thank you.


  7. happy napowrimo!


  8. oh…
    i like this.


  9. very nice indeed



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